Crash. My eyes flare open.
Drip. The faucet leaks.
Creak. The house is whispering.
Gasp. I try not to speak.
Crunch. Footsteps on broken glass.
Swish. The swinging door springs.
Thud. Someone's on the staircase.
Exhale. Conjured thoughts begin to scream.
Laura. My name is whispered.
Click. The doorknob is turned.
Sob. I clench my eyelids shut
Thump. Heartbeat so hard my chest burns.
Chuckle. Hands grasp my neck
Cry. I thrust foreward my kitchen knife
Grunt. A body falls to the ground.
Peek. I slowly open my eyes
Shriek. I see the blood
Scramble. I hurry to the door.
Grasp. Something grabs my ankle
Thud. I fall to the floor
Flip. It's quick and painless
Swish. To the knife I bend
Breathe. I take my last gulp of air
Sigh. I know this is the end.
I like it, it's realistic.