The screams of horror fill the air
as children watch their parents die
Not knowing that never again will they see them
yet still the tears flood their eyes
Their parents, so brave and so strong
now lie helplessly down on the ground
With a river starting up from their hearts
a red river filled with the deadliest sharks
"But their eyes are open why can't they see?"
"Why can't they open their mouths and just talk to me?"
"Their hands are freezing they're gonna catch cold."
The children will all remember this even when they're old
The wind isn't blowing, the trees stand still
and watch as the chilren are slowly killed
But unlike their parents their bodies still move
with held back tears that give them something to prove
As they lay with their parents in the dirt
their empty hearts and bellies all begin to hurt
But they all remember what they've been told
never leave your parents to go off on your own
So shivering they hug their parents tight
as the sun leaves the sky taking away its light.
Slowly, the children with their eyes open wide
one by one all begin to die...
and are warm again in their parents' beds
with the fingers of their mothers lovingly stroking their heads.
Very heartfelt and sad...once again, you do a great job of expressing deep emotion and bringing visual imagery to your reader's heads.
Whatever you do, you will do well:)