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Rewind
If I could rewind, go back and push play
would I change it all or turn out the same way?
Am I happy with who and what I've become?
Or am I full of things I wish I hadn't done?
Is my life at peace, am I happy right now?
If my life is not what I want could I change it somehow?
If I could only change one thing, what would it be?
Are there too many things I need to change about me?
Am I living my life for someone else?
Or am I living my life for only myself?
What would I do if I could go back in time?
Would I push the button that says rewind?
I really enjoyed this poem. Actually I can't recall reading a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you wouldn't mind I'd appreciate it if you would take a look at a few of my works and give me some pointers.
This poem is really good...This is one of the best pieces I think ive reade...Its short and simple yet straight to the point...I can relate to it alot...Its really good...Good job...
Nice and Meaningful, but try to separate the verses for easy reading.
I liked this...it is a well written piece about life choices, and it also has a playful quality (the rhyme scheme) that I appreciated.
Kristy,
i loved your poem "rewind" i think everybody asks themselves those questions at least once in there life. you have a wonderful way with words.
*Love always and forever*
*sara*
i would have to say i would never hit rewinded because iv had to many bad things happen to me.
There's nothing but to say that I actually feel the same way about what you said and wrote in this poem of yours. I really liked how it was talking about how it would be like if you turned back time to undo some things that you hadn't wished to do in the past, but we all know that things can't be undone once the past is gone, and that all we've got left is the present time in our lives to live, and yet again, we all feel the need to rewind back to where we would want to undo the things that we wish we hadn't done and now regret. Once again, there's nothing but to say that I really liked what you had to say and write about in this poem!! I can absolutely relate to this in so many different ways that are absolutely possible!! =)