i wanna be succesful

i can't really see or hear the best,
but i feel like success is standing in front of me screaming at me to come get
an to be honest im a little intimidated,
cause if i fail then all my dreams will be erased then,
an money issues im already havin
so to try an be what i want to be at this time is unrealistic
but the longer i wait the less chance will be of me having it
an if i ever have it ill be loyal an treat it with respect
an i never cared to win the lotto but i always fantasize about success
waiting patiently but everyone else thinks im a big mess
an gave up on me ever being what i know they all wanted
but i walk by faith and not by site
an trust me ill have you when the time is right!

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i dont know if what i write is poetry to others i know to me it is but i always feel like other ppl may not get it so i never really wrote poetry because of that feeling till recently but its how i feel more than anything

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