Love Fresh And New

When life is never ending and seems so uncertain,

Someone comes along and opens a curtain.

One that was closed so no one could see,

Behind that curtain so unsure was me.

You've helped open it and touched my heart,

And I hope meeting you will be a wonderful start.

These few days have been so wonderful it is true,

I have never met someone quite like you.

You fill the passion I've so long desire,

Being so close I would never tire.

I want to touch your heart,

Do not fear I won't part.

Give me time and you will see,

How much your bringing out the woman I longed to be.

Your like a breathe of fresh air so soft yet strong to,

I am so glad  to be with you.

Taking me gently in your arms,

Feeling so safe from any harm.

With you I feel so glad,

Being with you is the best experience I have had.

I want for you to feel this to,

Because you deserve the best to.

You are very special to me believe it for it's true,

I'm glad you found me and I found you.

If ever you feel sad and we seem to far,

Go look at the dollar you put up at the bar.

It will be there as a memory,

No one could ever take from you or me.  

Who knows where this will lead but I'll hold on tight,

It was so wonderful to hold you last night.

I was afraid to let go,

Thank you so much I wanted you to know.

I hope your patience never ends,

My dear kind loving friend.

No one could ever be,

All the things you've been to me.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Love can be wonderful this is true. But sometimes it can be a lie to. This is a poem I wrote when love was brand new. Now its just a memory I have of you.

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I love the crisp and fresh rhymes, they make the poem flow beautifully. Seems a little bit less poetic than I had hoped, but the title is perfectly chosen. Very good, I would rate 8.9 out of 10.