You’ve infested my mind, as rodents do in a city
You’re well established in my head
There you are again with your constant knocking
I’m wide awake
The determination you’ve shown to keep me like this is relentless
Last night when we spoke, you said you’d give me a chance
Gentle sleep
Having finished the job, it left my head
Well, perhaps it meant no harm
I rolled over to my left, and was greeted by sunrise
I love the changing tone that
I love the changing tone that your intriguing poem plays out. The emotions really reached out and grabbed me. Now I'm grappling with them, to unwrap the whole of this.
I'm really happy you enjoyed
I'm really happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for reading!
I like this poem, especially
I like this poem, especially the way it swerves at the end into the beauty and promise of sunrise.
Starward
Thank you for reading! Have a
Thank you for reading! Have a great week :)