the stars can see my tears tonight so why can't you
only the tissues catch my tears when I am blue
you always said you would steal all of my tears away
but they were still in my eyes the next day
could your heart not handle my pain that I carry
could your eyes not leave room for the tears I bury
one by one all we once were went down the drain
cause you always clog up every single vein
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stop suffocating me, taking away my air
cause I can only breathe when you are not there
I can't erase you out of my life
cause no matter how hard I try
you are always there crushing my spirit dead
what if I was suffocating you instead
then would you hear me screaming
screaming to break free
a messed up fairytale is what you gave me
filled with hopeless dreams I'll never see
my prince charming is nothing but a dark face
and kisses we used to share that I can no longer taste
laughs we used to share are nothing but a silent echo in my ear
and all you used to be is only present in each little tear
I hope you're satisfied with this mess you've made
like a lifeless rose you let our love just fade
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I feel your footsteps lingering in the doorway
and your anger burns through me in every word you don't say
but my tears are invisible to your heart cause it doesn't want to see
what's it done and all the terrible pain it has caused me
and you're obsessed with telling me it's going to be okay
but every night when I say my amens when I pray
I know it's not and it's hard to breathe
cause I am drowning when you are with me
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I really like this... I'd love to hear it in a melody.
I would suggest fixing the grammar a bit, but otherwise I love it.