Baseball Symphony

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Before 2006

tink.

        crack.

                thump.

                                     you're out!

                           yay!

            whoosh



gasp.

                                  cheer.



          crumple



                                           vroom.



                      snore.



                                        peanuts!

                            

dad!



                  we're over here!



                                       flies buzzing



do ya want anything?



                        that'll be 2 bucks



    crump crump crump



                                                                                          slap!





everywhere we go, people wanna know...





            2,4,6,8,who do we appreciate?



cheering.





                 rustle.





                                thump.



sigh.



                                           ouch.



               water running



                                          that's better



slammed car door





                            beep beep



           slam



                             keys jingling

                           tumblers clicking

                            home sweet home






Author's Notes/Comments: 

I'd like to make one comment. some of the sounds you're hearing in this poem are thoughts.

written on 5/18/2004
posted on 5/19/2004

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Geoff Mcmullen's picture

thoughts or sounds you have a unique style and your presentation is fun. I enloyed all the poems I read and will continue to come back.