I see your trouble,
day by day.
I see your tears,
I see your pain.
Why can't I wipe it all away?
I see you cry,
when I know you could fly.
Please,
I would go on my knees,
if only I could melt it all away.
When you speak of suicide,
it makes my want to cry,
to run and hide,
from the pain,
I just want to melt it all away.
I see your pain, I see you cry,
just please, please, don't say goodbye.
As someone who knows the darkness of being suicidal, and having delt with others in that state, I really enjoyed your poem. How great it would have been to have a friend write something like this during those times! I couldn't have said it better:)
love ur work keep it up
When you speak of suicide,
it makes my want to cry,
to run and hide,
from the pain,
I just want to melt it all away.
I see your pain, I see you cry,
just please, please, don't say goodbye
SUICIDE.......SUCH A HARD TOPIC....I KNOW IT OH SO WELL....IN THIS POEM U R THE FRIEND REACHING OUT LETTING HIM/HER KNOW U R THERE TO CATCH THEM AND HELP THEM BACK UP?I LOVED THIS POEM MORE THEN YOU'LL EVER KNOW....THANK U:)