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Like a crushed pearl,
shattered in its beauty
You lie on the cold surface,
so enticingly broken
Your lips once rosy,
now turned white
Open up,
as last breath escapes,
its prison
Leaving silence,
and an ocean scarlet,
to mark the existance,
of a soul now lost
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Your poem is very concise and I love the descriptions, it brings together the whole scene.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
I had this image in my head
I had this image in my head and I tried to "paint" it with words, you might say and your comment shows I somewhat succeeded. Thank you!
Awaiting more of your words.
Awaiting more of your words. Very nice.
That`s great t hear, thank
That`s great to hear, thank you!
So sad but so touchingly
So sad but so touchingly written, very very good.
Thank you!
Thank you!