"Good-Bye..."

“Good-bye world,
Who has curled,
Around my neck.
Good-bye family,
Who so scarily,
Might not miss me.
Good-bye my love,
Whom has cheated,
One time too many.
Good-bye friends,
Whose niceness ends,
Here and now.”
This is what she wrote,
Before the suffering left the boat.
As she jumped,
She said,
“Good-bye world,
Good-bye family,
Good-bye my love,
Good-bye my friends.
F*ck all who f*ucked me hard,
F*ck all who f*cked me well.”
Her life ended 15 minutes later.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this is almost like what i did when i tried to commit suicide, but as u can see... i didnt do it, so i wrote this poem to explain to the world the saddness that is creeping across our nations!!! (dont ask!!)

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deathangelsdarkrose's picture

this is really good


Chana Fuller 

Teressa Heafner's picture

sad poem. I hope you are through the rough times in your life. Good luck.

Katie Brewer's picture

that was awesome, i have poems on here too, under latie brewer. i talk to kyle, your boyfreind, he gave me your name and i found this one and it stuck out, it is so cool, awesome job!