"This Is The End"

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Suicide poems

I sit on my bed,

And I lay back.

I close my eyes,

And I pray that it doesn’t hurt that bad.

I know in my mind that this will change my life forever,

And I hope that no one thinks of me any differently.

It starts in,

It hurts,

It stings,

It’s hard.

Deeper and deeper it goes.

I bite my lip.

“My god this hurts,” I say in my mind.

Deeper and deeper,

Harder and harder.

Tears streak down my face,

As I stick the cold, hard knife,

Deeper and deeper,

Into my stomach.

I say to my self,

“This is the end.”

Author's Notes/Comments: 

hehe.. so what were you thinking when you started to read this poem?? huh huh??

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Amy Hunt's picture

you seem to calm in this poem. no screaming mentioned or nothing like that. but other than that, this is very good.

Reven Undone's picture

I was thinking of a song by the doors.

Katie Brewer's picture

again, i like this poem, it is very good, at first i though it was about sex(me and my dirty mind) but it wasnt, i really liked it!

Princess of Darkness's picture

wow i really like it. it's written with simple words yet gives a deep impact....maybe because I was expecting the knife in the stomach thing....it was touching.

Christopher Orchard's picture

suicide, self mutilation... these things i have toyed with, and if there is one thing i have learnt, that it aint worth it, i bear the deep scars of cold steel along my wrists, and bear the engraving and torn flesh of an ex gf's name up my arm. and if anything at all, i wanna say, dont do it, if you live, can you relate to those scars, is it worthwhile? What i was thinking at the start was exactly that, suicide, and i have to say, no matter what terror the world brings about, no matter what the circumstances, there is always someone on this world that wants you alive! so i hope its not the end, and there is plenty more poems to come from u..