You Can Always Trust the Dog to be Honest

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You Can Always Trust the Dog to be Honest

Too many warm bodies
had been in my bed,
when I noticed something
that stopped the clocks,
cause parallel universes to merge,
and opened my eyes;
only the dog and cat loved me,
although the cat
was a bit codependent.

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Lived & learned, but still trust dogs more than most people ;-)

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last updated 7 March 2013 - 3:30pm
©6 March 2013 - 4:01pm — Faded_shades

2 May 2013 - 3:34am — running_with_rabbits

:) I adore this, it is much

:) I adore this, it is much like the one about music, so simple and seems very staright forward but then there is so much between the lines and one can go so deep into it that they put their own meaning to every word

also I think dogs by nature are more codependant than cats but now I am going to keep an eye on both and see which behave more codependant...but dogs are the ones who can be beat and will love their owner...cats run away

Much Love

Ashley

19 May 2013 - 1:04pm — Faded_shades

;-)

I love just love ya Dear!!! You always make my day! This is one othose I wrote for me and may be too inside and subtle, but the title and poem don't work without each other! Hugs, my Dear!

19 May 2013 - 3:07pm — running_with_rabbits

Oh Beavis! it is the very

Oh Beavis! it is the very fact that it IS too inside and subtle that makes it so wonderful! It os deeply connect to you and thus the feeling you had was very clear and came though the words, and because it is not blunt and out right saying that feeling, just alluding to it, we can put our on feelings into it without a word her or there that muddles our projection of self! I just love it! and one second look cats may be more co-dependant and very good at hiding it by pretending not to need us ;)

Much Love

Ashley

4 April 2013 - 1:13am — amywilkie