I've known this girl all of my life,
and I first told her, when I was five,
how I felt about her.
She didn't seem to feel the same for me then,
but even though she didn't...she said
Be with me.
Be my friend,
and we'll walk the world together
holding hands.
Be with me.
I waited for more than ten years
after that day,
and then I asked her again
just to see what she'd say...
She said be with me.
Just be my friend,
and we'll walk through life together
until the end.
I know you love me like that,
but I don't feel the same about you
because what I need from you
is a friend.
Please just be with me.
Then one day I asked her about Jesus,
and she said "He's the best friend you'll ever have."
A few months passed by,
and Christmas had come and gone.
I was depressed cause I was alone.
Then Jesus reached out his hand
as I remembered what she said,
and he said...
Please be with me.
Just be my friend,
and we'll walk through heaven together
holding hands.
When you fall I'll lift you up,
and knock off all the dust
that Satan puts on you...
I'll even clean it with my blood,
and you will be clean.
If you just be with me.
wow! This is an amazing poem. I love it... great job.
...and thanks for the critques. :P
meagan