Blood Lust

I see her walking down the snowy path

Yet she does not see me or my wrath

I come upon her like a flash

I hit her with a bash



I see her, in my arm

I see her throat and how I want to harm

I bring my teeth to her neck

Seeing her face, reminds me of my first peck



The guilt that pulsed through my veins

Is this all in vain?

I feel my canines grow

But with her, I just throw



I drop her on the ground and let her be

She comes to, but does not see me

For I am a shadow

My reflection is hollow



I watch her leave from a tree

Remembering how good it used be

When I was free

When I was not the forsaken...


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I love vampires

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crimsondestiny's picture

Commendable

Karyn Indursky's picture

You had me going there. I was regretting liking your work because I thought you were an abusive jackass in the beginning of the poem, but as I read on I realized you weren't. My bad. I love reading about vampires, too. There's just something erotic and captivating about sucking upon a guy's neck that gets the body going. But, yeah, I loved this piece.

Joah Rodela's picture

oooooo00000ooooooo....this is kinda...hehehehe you should show kim mortenson this one... she love vampies too!!!-Crazy Mofo-

Ashley Darner's picture

Quite intriguing... good work. :)

Kaylee Chernoff's picture

this is an awesome poem, i love vampires and all the dark and mistery type of stuff in life. Anyways keep writting poemns and especailly poems like this one or whatever sutis you but this was awesome.