My heart is burning
My eyes are running
Why do I feel so?
Because my love is now my foe!
The pain is getting too great
I fear I've sealed my fait
How could this happen again?
Because I did not ponder again
I'm messed up, and only to blame
The face that I am too lame
I hate my life and this world
I could end my depressing world
With a knife or a gun
And let all know I'm having fun
To hell I go without haste
With my brains on the wall like paste!
Your words run down the page like your crying emotions for attention in a unique written fashion and I'm impressed. Keep up the writing and you'll go far.