SADNESS (With rejoinders by other poets)

Sadness:

days of sadness!

Days of sadness?

Days of sadness -

Oh yes,

my days of sadness,

you bless...

I am not anyone's

Nor anyone mine,

Now,

there's no h

no hope...

All dark,

in my sadness.

How I laugh,

Yes, how I laugh,

See, how I laugh,

So tuned,

to my sadness...

Sadness:

Sadness -

You bless,

all my time of sadness.



1)  REJOINDER BY 'POETICPIERS'

    

    Choose not sadness as your raiment

    the time of mourning is long past

    Time to wear a brighter garment

    look to the future not the past.

    For every thing there is a season

    new love needs to find a reason

    to come and visit you.



2) REJOINDER BY 'REDSTORMY'



   There is a time to mourn..hoping your weeping will not last too long.

            'Red'


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another one of my sad poems...inspired by a song in Hindi by late Kundan Lal Saigal who sang it in the 1930s for the hit Hindi movie DEVDAS.

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Hurina Gaspar's picture

this is beautiful.