Masquerade

                            I love the way you make your moves

                            struttin tall in leather boots.

                            made up eyes and sailin smooth.



                            But your nights are lonely girl

                            beyond the look's another world

                            and sets my mind to whirl.



                            Chorus:

                            You keep dreamin girl of better days

                            but you're lost in the future's haze

                            you're getting older in your masquerade

                            how much time is left to guess?



                            I feel you scared when I'm near you

                            you entertain a look of gloom

                            you look so helpless in that room.



                            Something strange this life you lead

                            you're in the land of make believe

                            with fairy tales and crazy dreams.



                            I love the way you state your game

                            painted nails and long gold chains

                            your curled lips your fashion frame.



                            I'd love to see your long black hair

                            across my pillow everywhere

                            imagine how I'd love you there.



                            Rep Chorus:

                            You keep dreamin girl of better days

                            but you're lost in the future's haze

                            you're getting older in your masquerade

                            how much time is left to guess?

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Gary Mills's picture

I happened across your work as a random flash. Kismit, I will be reading more, (as I email myself to mark the spot for use at home) I hope more of your stuff is lyrical, I'm trying to learn to write. I know at my advanced age and all.. but I could "steal" some style from you. I really liked this. I think all of life is a masquerade, and we are all hiding from something. Or someone, even if it is ourself. I prattled on long enough, NICE job, and I will be dropping back for more

Stay safe.

Gary

Melvin Lee's picture

Hahhaha.. i have to agree with Rach totally...this poem definitely has a strong soul to it, bittersweet and perhaps, even whimsical.... Some people just hide behind their masks...and live a life of masquerade, for all their days... GLad u could move your works here, too. Smilesz.. take care.

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

Eric, This one is passionate and mystic :) I love your writing, it has soul~ I was extremely pleased with your recent decision to move your work here. We do appreciate your talent!!