(light country)
Girl it's six in the morning
daybreak dawning
and deep down but not destroyed
I'm a shadow of a love you knew
inside a ring of fire and youth
on a river of dreams passing through.
Goodnight Mr. Moon
somewhere I used to be
I see you smiling at me.
Good morning Mr. Day
I know it's time again
to be on my way
with my world in your eyes
I just can't stay.
Girl it's about where we've been
talkin chin to chin
and all the things that matter
are in the love and truth we knew
inside a ring of fire and youth
on a river of dreams passing through.
Goodnight Mr.Love
somewhere I used to be
keeps you inside of me.
Good morning Mr. Day
I know it's time again
to be on my way
with my world in your eyes
I just can't stay.
I wrote the words/lyrics to this song a couple of years ago and finally found Mike McCaslin to colllaborate with me and put it to music. As a result the following can be heard at mp3 by going to the link below..this can be done easily by clicking on the same link under my web page in my personal bio that way it does'nt have to be typed in...thank you Eric True
http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/141/michael_mccaslin.html
Eric: wow. I feel honored to have my burgeoning attempts at song-writing critiqued by someone who has actually made a song. Kudos to you! I'm gonna head on over and see if I can listen to it. :o) ~*Maggie*~
Damn, these lyrics are amazing. This really knocked my socks off. Talking chin to chin, what a great image. I can't even find the words to explain how much I liked this song. I can't wait to hear it. Love, aly
Eric... I just finished listening to this song... wow it is just wonderful... I am so glad that I was moved to stop in and read some of your work or I might have missed out on this .... you are truly talented.... and who ever it is that is singing this has a wonderful voice..... thank you again for posting this for all to share.... you are just awesome.... Renee'
very good lyrics ,the last years songs suffer a lot from the lack of good lyrics...this is a very good poem ,and a great lyric's song...I have some songs -lyrics-,but need more care ..great work! Ali
Hi, Eric. Love the lyrics. Very nice. I may have to go and check out the music.
Although this type of song is not my personal favorite, this is nice... and has a fabulous appeal to many. I love artistic collaborations and you did well with this effort!