Dave's Poem

what can i say

losing a friend

do to another

suicide

plain to see

his life is gone

sad song

written by artists unknown

hearing laughter

tears spitting

out faster then a fire hydrent

my mind soaked

wet confused

lost another thats 23

deaths that were friends



looking through a glass

a picture will always last

there soul will never be lost

dave will always be rememberd

as that happy child

who fell on the jungle gym

lies in a silent solitude



built to last

firing anger at his poem

stayed completey calm

as he died with a broken heart i don't know

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My friend Dave Killed Himself after school, The question Lingers WHY!

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Athena LaFlair's picture

The question why will always be there. That's the thing with suicide: it leaves so many unanswered questions.

Corie Lynn M.'s picture

I know how hard it is to lose friends to suicide, I've lost about 3, but to lose 23 friends, I don't think I could bare all that pain.
This is an outstanding poem. Keep Writing!

Bonnie Hern's picture

hey elliot thats a really good poem and its very sad..i think your storys will touch many peoples hearts!!!go look at some of my poems my name is bonnie hern!!
later buh-bye *me*!!!