Better Then A Rose
written By Elliot Bush
At midnight the phone rang with a message that said
A rose is a real great way to show you care about someone
A rose will make things all better
A rose is even better when it comes with a written letter
But i was hit with something much stronger then a rose
A girl who i seen who had a Perfect Smile
and very pretty face and very beautiful eyes
I wanted to say hi that day
but i was afraid so i walked away
The next day was so much more different
I ask her a question and it turned out she gave me her Digit
but to what you ask i shall not tell
just when you see the rose you will know i'm not to tell
if it came true..
Just the Love
i can show her if the question will apear
will bring happiness to what is sincere
Today i hope this poem will keep the smile on her face.
wonderful work
on this piece .
Best poem!! not only cuz it was written for me..haha. ur poems r awesome elliot!! Happy BDAY!!