BETTER THEN A ROSE

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It's All Love

Better Then A Rose

written By Elliot Bush





At midnight the phone rang with a message that said



A rose is a real  great way to show you care about someone

A rose will make things all better

A rose is even better when it comes with a written letter



But i was hit with something much stronger then a rose

A  girl who i seen who had a Perfect Smile

and very pretty face and very beautiful eyes

I wanted to say hi that day

but i was afraid so i walked away

The next day was so much more different

I ask her a question and it turned out she gave me her Digit



but to what you ask i shall not tell

just when you see the rose you will know i'm not to tell

if it came true..



Just the Love

i can show her if the question will apear

will bring happiness to what is sincere

Today i hope this poem will keep the smile on her face.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

This Poem was Written for Emily Z. She had just started her first day at work and I fell for her, We didn't date But thought about it. So We just stayed really good friends. Emily Love ya like a Sister. Your Big Bro Elliot

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poetvg's picture

wonderful work
on this piece .

Emily's picture

Best poem!! not only cuz it was written for me..haha. ur poems r awesome elliot!! Happy BDAY!!