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Reaper took her away
Everyone in my family is crying softly, at the ending of her life.
Everyone in my family but me, is crying softly, it hasnt hit me yet.
Im waiting for it to hit, im waiting for it to hurt me, i know its going to,
but i dont know when.
Why is it that i feel so numb, yet still in pain?
I want to cry and sob out my brains.
I cant stop thinking of you, and i cant stoping thinking
about the reaper in the room.
He came for you, and took you away,
so why is he, still lingering today?
He hasnt left, he hasnt gone,
he has stayed and has brought the darkness along.
Reaper you need to go,
you are a un wanted guest,
who needs to leave our home.
Reaper reaper
you stole her away
now our hearts are filled with pain.
Yes i know hers is gone,
and she is safe, no longer
filled with pain and memories
that arent hers, that she hates.
But the pain is strong
and will not leave
the memories of her
is lingering in me.
Why wont it hit me?!?!?!
This doesn't suck at all! I
This doesn't suck at all! I liked it! It reminds me of when my Grandma passed away. I'm sorry for your loss.
~BUG~
Lol thanks. Though I think it
Lol thanks. Though I think it sucks. It's nothing compared to my other poems.
I just needed to type, and it's what came out. All of my poems, are open for re writing or add ons when I come to it lol. This is not one of my best. Thanks i apprciated it, but please dont say your sorry, its not your fault nor your problem, and you have no reason to apolgize. Like I said please check out other poems. :)
-Elfy*
it's a mark of a great writer
it's a mark of a great writer to know their own work is crap hahaha, however in creation there is no perfection but what our hearts desire :) keep trying you will get it, you always do.
This is really really beautiful
HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
=/ I really liked the poem.
=/ I really liked the poem. I'm glad that you were so close to your grandmother. My grandmother acts like she hates me.
<3