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Nobody would notice if I died.
If I died, and went away, nobody would notice anyway.
I'd be gone, and out of mind, and those who are blind,wouldn't cry.
They don't see me walking in the halls, they don't know my name, they don't relieze I'm in their class, till the teacher calls out my name.
I'm quiet and shy. I keep to myself.
I like it better that way. No one to tease me, no one to laugh, no one to make me feel bad.
I sit in the 2nd row,so I can see, but also so nobody will pay attention to me.
I lay my head down, and I write, it allows me to escape.
Escape the days, the pain, the shame, that to my class, I have no name.
It doesnt bother me, that people ignore me.
To them, I am nobody.
I'm not popular, I'm not preppy, I'm not sporty, I'm not whory, I'm not a part of the clones.
I'm am my own. I am me.
I act differently, I have morals, I have integrity, I have honesty, I have responsibility.
I have plenty of friends who love me, and know me, so guess what. I'm not giving up, I'm not dying, I'm not about to leave them crying,
I'm staying. To fight. And live in spite, of all the people, who don't treat others right.
To them, I'm nobody, to them, Im nameless,
Well to me...
They are who I say goodbye to, cause I have a life to live today.
the begining reminded me of
the begining reminded me of my poem "Friends" but it took a turn my poem did not. i loved it cuz i can relate, i am shy but i only act part of me home part of me at school, part of my with strangers. i dont really act like me wholely with anyone, just the pages, you, and other friends who care so like two more people. i would care if you'd die, I'd cry myself to sleep the night i found out.
Oh! Btw! I would SOOOOO
Oh! Btw! I would SOOOOO notice if you died! I'd be heartbroken!
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I liked this! Alot! It's
I liked this! Alot! It's quite good! And you are writing about something that most shy people live inside of! Just like you, I am quite shy, and I usually try to stay in the dark and not be in the spotlight. This is a great write! Keep on writting!
But, just some grammar help, lol. When you wrote: "they don't knowmy name,they don't relies I'm in their class, till the teacher calls out my name."
First thing is that you'll need a space between know and my. Also, where you wrote "relies" it should be-- realize.
Another one is: "I'm not dying, I'm not about. To leave them crying,"
I'm not sure if you ment for there to be a period, so I'm just checking!
Sorry! I couldn't help it! Love ya!
-Moriah
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Thanks. Im glad.lol im not
Thanks. Im glad.lol im not always shy. To a school of people, or a class room with out my friends, or people i know, i am shy. But to a group of ROTC cadets, or around all my friends, or family, im far from shy. lol. Im load, hyper, random, and all over the place, and out there. Im shy sometimes, but i have alot of friends. They all know im not shy at all. XD i fixed it i think the mistakes lol.
its fine i dont mind corrections, no need to say your sorry hon.
love ya too.
-Elfy*
okays! koolio! What does ROTC
okays! koolio! What does ROTC mean??
Love ya!
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Reserve Officer Training
Reserve Officer Training Core. (its spelled Corps, i didnt know if you would know what it was lol)
Its a program, its like a miltary thing, but your not enlisting lol.
its a class. you get credits for it. you learn about Aerospace Science, n leadership education.
we were a uniform every wedsday n we drill, and every friday we do PT Physical Training, push ups, sit ups, pull ups, running, strechs ext...
and we do parades n stuff n community service. im a reserve right now, im not in class till next sememster.
-Elfy*
Wow. That sounds kool! I bet
Wow. That sounds kool! I bet you're getting pretty Toned! ;}'
That face is dreamy and licking lips sorta
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lol i have a flat strong
lol i have a flat strong tummy. bf says i got abs but it dont look like it but u can feel it when u poke my belly when i tighten muscles up lol XD
-Elfy*
Lol that's awsome!
Lol that's awsome!
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lol yups!
lol yups!
-Elfy*
Sounds sexy >;}
Sounds sexy >;}
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I must say I really did enjoy
I must say I really did enjoy this one, and pretty much described my school days hahaha I can still remember it. However no in hindsight I sometimes wish I only spoke up for myself a little more where it counted. That would be one of the few regrets I have in my past and I learned that regrets would probably be the single most destrutive force a person will have to face. :) a very good read, and again I can relate very well to this.
When I need to, I will speak
When I need to, I will speak up. I have no problem doing so. Sometimes I should be silent, but my mouth gets me into trouble lol. But if it's not worth it, I let it go.
And thank you. :)
-Elfy*