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The pictures of you
I will never get you back
so why cry now
I told you I loved you
You said you forgot how
Your words tore me inside and out
I did everything but i never figured it out
what went wrong
What came out of my mouth
I screamed for you
But you didnt want to listen
When i was gone
You had no clue i was missing
Your words tore me inside and out
I did everything but i never figured it out
what went wrong
What came out of my mouth
Now i lay here and stare at pictures of you
While you tell me how much you love me and what you would do
Why should i cry now
Ten years later iv figured it out
every once in a while i still think about
Your words tore me inside and out
I did everything but i never figured it out
what went wrong
What came out of my mouth
Looking at the pictures of you
I rememberd
I told you i loved you
all the broken hearts of love, they all have similar
themes, mine as well. I thought I had a special case
but apparently not after reading your poem/
I guess I was right about your "worthless tears"
it was caused by love afterall.
I like your style of writing.
You let your emotions fly all over the page.
I'll be honest, I'm not usually a huge fan of this free-flowing, non-punctuation type poems. But... I really liked this one... Everything building up to the ending, the repetition in it all works very well.
Honestly, I loved it :) Keep it up.