black widower/ escaped solitude

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tears the color of ashes,

ashes the color of blood,

my heart, a semblance of comfort,

and begging to be loved.



hope has spread its wings and flown,

out of this darkened room,

above the highest sights in soars,

my position below is consumed.



these webs, a sticky tangled mass,

and you, the black widower,

i run over the nearest threshold,

in search of a life i can endure.



and you've only chosen to hold me,

because your former self is dead,

wrapped up in a soulful whisper,

replacing love with hate instead.



escape is lost in solitude,

and solitude escapes in the crowd,

mingled with a meaningful word,

but (the truth) never spoken aloud.



pandora's box is in your hands;

you know its contents well,

but are the stories told in truth,

or purposely made so i'll never tell?




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J R's picture

Very beautiful poem obviously written with a lot of emotion. I only have one problem with it...you didnt capitalize your "i"s ^_~

(sorry its sort of a petpeeve :D, other than that is woderful!)

Vanessa Austin's picture

this is awesome I loved it. Sorry I cant say more but I cant really think of anything else at the moment.