It hurts my eyes to look at you.
You burn so bright, shine with life and an innerlight;
I did not know I had been existing in safe
darkness until you swept by, stealing my breath with
your beauty.
You make me want to taste your fire, burn my lips
and scorch my tongue with your heat.
I bet you�d taste like candy redhots, all sweet, sticky
and cinnamon hot.
I�d like to crunch until the aftertaste of you catches
between my teeth, teasing my memories with sugared
echoes every time I take a breath.
Should I feed this desire?
I want to blow softly on your embers and then watch
as your flesh dances, flickers and flares beneath my touch.
What caress might fuel your delight?
Would you show me how to make you blaze,
rage out of control, until we are both consumed?
Or do I keep this all inside, never letting you see
your effect on me, keeping cold and secret within my safe darkness,
and letting your light pass me by.
Nice....Very true in every aspect. I liked how you put in the metaphor of the crush with red hots. Very sweet!!! I can see what you are trying to say in my mind cause you desribed everything so nice in detail. Very good!
I like the contrast between the taste of redhot and the cold control of not responding! Which voice is his and which is hers. every on gets to chose!
Dan Kunkel