As blood flows my eyes close and I see you again. In your time of need you are not free it's all because of them. I hear your voice i feel your skin, every thing is perfict and nothing could go wrong, then i wake up and all is gone
this is Nick your uncle. I like the poem u r a good writer. You should read some of my poems sometime on this if you get the chance. www.postpoems.com/members/Deathscompanion8 ill talk to you lata c ya
(sorry Eddie but this comment is for kasi) Kasi you must not have known what you were saying when you told me you didn't think that poem was to good. I liked it alot. You should as well! lol. Oh yeah...what up Eddie?
if your dreams are untrue
and no ones really there
but in your heart you will always know that i truley care
and in mind in spiret i am with you
waiting for each moment
and seeing your dreams come true
and that i to can only dream of you
and as i lie and wonder
with reastles thoughts in my head
i know you are doing the same
at home in your own bed
29 October 2004 - 8:56pm — Alexandra Reeves (not verified)
AwWwWwWwW!Thats AWESOME!Sorry..You came over my house with paulie remember???This is Alex.YOU TICKLED ME!!!It shocked me soo bad.You made me fall between Nick and the chair...that was fun though...
Dude thats really kick ass. I like it alot as well man. Keep it up. Belive it or not but I do enjoy reading people I care about's poetry. Even if that is pussy like it's how I am. peace bro
hey eddie
this is Nick your uncle. I like the poem u r a good writer. You should read some of my poems sometime on this if you get the chance. www.postpoems.com/members/Deathscompanion8 ill talk to you lata c ya
Jonzy
(sorry Eddie but this comment is for kasi) Kasi you must not have known what you were saying when you told me you didn't think that poem was to good. I liked it alot. You should as well! lol. Oh yeah...what up Eddie?
if your dreams are untrue
and no ones really there
but in your heart you will always know that i truley care
and in mind in spiret i am with you
waiting for each moment
and seeing your dreams come true
and that i to can only dream of you
and as i lie and wonder
with reastles thoughts in my head
i know you are doing the same
at home in your own bed
AwWwWwWwW!Thats AWESOME!Sorry..You came over my house with paulie remember???This is Alex.YOU TICKLED ME!!!It shocked me soo bad.You made me fall between Nick and the chair...that was fun though...
Dude thats really kick ass. I like it alot as well man. Keep it up. Belive it or not but I do enjoy reading people I care about's poetry. Even if that is pussy like it's how I am. peace bro
That's really good Eddie.. I really do like it ..