The waves came and caught me
once again
mercillesly tumbling me about
I could not swim
I had almost drowned
But they have thrown me back to shore
where I lie
coughing and trembling
waiting until the violent waves come and take me into the storm once again.
I too have a poem aboput drowning..and i like yours. It's so real, always seem to be waiting to go back out into that ocean/.