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What would you do, if they gave you one year?

If the doctor’s said that the time was near



What would you do if they gave you one day?

Should you be more careful ‘bout the things you say?



What would you do if they gave you one hour?

Remember the good times, or remember the sour?



What would YOU do if it’s your turn to die?

Don’t know the feeling?  YOUR turn to cry



Coded in silence is the fate of your life

How long you live, how much time



When the times up, what will you do?

I’ll tell you what, NOTHING, your through



Before that times up, you’d better start apologizing

Apologize for all the times you’ve lied, all the times you’ve yelled at your mom,

All the things you’ve said under your breath, before you rest…



Better start giving, what little you have

Better start LIVING, the little time you have



Pray for the best, even in the worst

Soon you won’t hunger, soon you won’t thirst…



Before you go, tell someone you love ‘em

Before you go, tell ‘em you care

May be the last chance you ever get,

May be the last chance, life’s not fair



What would you do if your time’s almost passed?

One more hug?  It might be your last…




Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ok, I'll be straight.  My grandpa doesn't have much time left.  In all honesty, I don't think he will last the summer.  Doctor's gave him a month, that was about two weeks ago.  I'm praying, but I know his time's almost up.  Here's my question for you:  what would YOU do if they gave you a year?  An hour?  A minute?  Never waste an opporitunity to tell someone you love them.  When your time's almost up, take the opporitunity when it comes up.  Might not have the opporitunity when your in a coffin six feet below.
UPDATE: Grandpa passed away recently.  God rest his soul.

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teresa_r's picture

I Loved this Poem it was beautiful well done. TERESA RIFE

41tulips's picture

I loved this poem. It got me teary-eyed because it reminded me of my dad who died of cancer. I know what he did when it was his last year. I think what I would do is apologize to everyone that I've done wrong to and do the absolute happiest/craziest things in the last hours of my life. Believe me, I think my dad would've wanted more minutes, hours, days, weeks, months, years, decades...


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