My rating for this poem: ***
(*-pure crap, **-Not so Great, ***-Farely decent, ****- Excellent, *****- Outstanding)
Her lips are like magic
Wondrous they are
Her life has been tragic
Up this far
Skin so soft and gentle to feel
Eyes so longing, and heart full of zeal.
The essence of love, the essence of life
The essence of passion, soon to be my wife.
If ever a problem should knock on your door
If ever a trouble should make your heart sore
If ever you need me to help quell the beast
Ask me my dear, and you shall receive.
A star crossed gaze, a lonely smile
I’m here to help, not just for a while
If ever you need me, if ever you might
Just ask for me, any time, be day, or be night.
You’ve got what it takes; you’re worth all my heart
Your worth every dime, so lets never part
I love you forever and every season,
To break your heart would be love treason.
lovely.....i like it alot it kicks