Sweet 16

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Gothic

WARNING: THIS WORK CONTAINS STRONG LANGUAGE.  IF THIS OFFENDS YOU, PLEASE DO NOT READ THIS.



Sixteen deaths, I die I die

but sixteen breaths, I sigh, I sigh

untill the time I fly, I fly...



Do you think that I am right to reign,

but I don't feel pain, insane,

to reign, inhumane, the same, it's strange...



Dominate the globe

take the throne

Sit and watch... the world go f****ng by...



Sixteen tears I cry, I cry

but sixteen years I lie, I lie

and sixteen fears, at night, at night...



Why would it matter what I've done,

if the thing we all are waiting for was here with us,

the times have come and gone to pass,

but all the wasted years are added up!!!



No one understands the deaths of yore,

and how it brought the pain, oh dear

whats to fear? sixteen years, all for fear,

time is near...



SIXTEEN F***ING DEATHS I DIE I DIE

SIXTEEN TO DETEST I CRY I CRY

WHY ARE WE WASTING OUR TIME OUR TIME

lets go and commit our crime.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a song of anger.  I was not 16 when I wrote this, but the ever so increasing teenage troubles are still present.  Think of this one as more of a "be glad I took the pain instead of YOU" poem.

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Amanda McDaniel's picture

Hey Justin i really liked this poem! i'm 16 so I thought it was way cool!!

Justin,
Hey thanks for thinking, that my poem is worth somthing! and dont
worry I wrote that last year some time! I dont really entend to do it!
I'm a much happer person now!!
I also want to thank you for careing!
but really I'm fine! I don't think I could EVER! kill my
self!...but hey it is a great poem!! :)(right) well I just wanted to tell you not to worry! I also wanted to thank you! Have you read any of my other poems? well
e-mail me back if ya wanna!

-Simply Amanda-

sorry I tryed to e-mail ya but somthing went wrong!! maybe it was your e-mail address i dont know but what ever so I wrote it here hope you dont mind!