My rating for this poem: Somewhere between **** and *****
(*-pure crap, **-Not so Great, ***-Farely decent, ****- Excellent, *****- Outstanding)
A tous le monde, Je suis un pour tous et tous pour un...
The fear is killing you my dear
It’s strangling you like a garret
You choke, but not for long, I'm near
If you do find love, ensnare it.
Trap any shame or guilt inside
Box it up with a parcel of pride
Tie a ribbon with your heart so wide,
And send it down the shoreline.
Now take some love, which you have plenty of, and a little bit of joy,
Mix in a little strength, at some length,
and finish it off with beauty.
Your love is deeper than an endless hall,
Your all for one and one for all.
Your strength is longer than China's Great Wall, because your all for one
and one for all.
Honor the past and never do fall
your all for one and one for all
Sail on your great mast, and never appall
your all for one and one for all
Your grace is deeper than the ocean blue, and I've never met one as
graceful as you.
Don't ever stop fighting to find the truth, because someday, the truth might
find you.
Wounded courage won't stop you, just never be thralled
Your all for one and one for all.
Hey,thanks for commenting on my poem.This poem I can realate to some.And congrats on getting married.Whish ye the best on it.And you are a very talanted boy.Keep up the good work!!
Nikki