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Nightmares of the mind...

As i sit alone and think, i get barraged with intense thoughts

sabotaged by pain i saw, i withdraw from the world or just the people who make me sick,

run from those who make me tic because my anger has become a bomb with immense force.

Yet still i can love, and appreciate beauty, even when that bomb blows without remorse

i can still show love as beautiful as a field of gorse so endorse my love, don't label me as dangerous,

i just require maintenance, playfulness, faithfulness, i just need my patroness, for now i wait with anxiousness.

For the days that go past my heart feels more and more harassed, forced to bask in my pain, since there's a grasp on my brain.

I yank and pull away but this hold on my emotions is beyond comprehension, its like my very mind has become my prison,

and my self criticism keeps me too weak to break out, so i shout hoping that someone can hear my screams..

Imprisoned inside my own mind... Please someone tell me this is a dream. - Devonte Mack

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©11 November 2011 - 4:07am — Dmack8104
11 November 2011 - 4:53am — grimfate
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This is not a dream

I like this poem, it runs like a masquerade parallel to life, in which case you have grown stronger than your self doubt and there is no need to scream, for your voice now travels the world with but a whisper. You are better served to pen and paper rather than emotional hard time.

this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

20 November 2011 - 6:53am — Dmack8104
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Awesome :)

I'm happy you read my poem but im even more happy you enjoyed it enough to leave me a comment and its great to see that people can feel my work just like i feel it when im writing it.

An ignorant mind neglects common sense, seeking what doesn't exists, unaware of the coming abyss, and cannot see the hate behind a loving kiss. - Devonte Mack

’ ̿’̵͇̿̿з=(ˆ◡ˆ)=ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ Don't make me shoot you with my love, Its deadly..

11 November 2011 - 4:26am — poet610
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Nightmares of the mind

Great poem,
i know the feelings you express here.
waken dream as i would say.
keep penning
610

20 November 2011 - 6:54am — Dmack8104
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Thank you

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and im happy you enjoyed it, and it would be aprriciated if you checked out some of my other poems :)

An ignorant mind neglects common sense, seeking what doesn't exists, unaware of the coming abyss, and cannot see the hate behind a loving kiss. - Devonte Mack

’ ̿’̵͇̿̿з=(ˆ◡ˆ)=ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ Don't make me shoot you with my love, Its deadly..