Are you still in love,
He might ask me.
What do you think?
I return the question.
And then I affirm
With a nod,
Of course I am,
But it no longer exists.
I look back
Through my tears,
And my words,
And I see what it was,
And could have been.
I was willing to burn
Forever
On that flame.
But you were not.
I was wiling to cool
Forever.
But you were not.
I was willing to morph
Unending,
To burn on that flame.
But you were not.
Intuition,
Your core
Knew.
Concern
And your care,
Knew.
I was willing to burn
Forever
On that flame
But you were not
I was wiling to cool
Forever
But you were not
I was willing to morph
Unending
To burn on that flame
So you may ask me
Are you still in love
And I have to think
And consider the question
And I affirm
With a nod
And the knowledge
It no longer exists.
This is the ending. The book is shut.
The end of what might have been a flaming hot story??
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-Lauren