2003-02-13 Tell Me About Love

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Book: Castle View

 

Tell me about love


Is it just something that makes you feel good

Deep in the night
When you feel his sweet breath on your lips
And you inhale to capture him
Smell him.

 

I'll tell you about love

 

It's something that makes your soul comfortable
Out in the day
When you sit in his arms and warm your back on his chest
And you inhale to capture him
Smell him

 

That's what Ive known about love.

 

That feeling of rightness and calm
At the rush of twilight
When you feel cool spring air on naked winter bodies
And you inhale to capture it
And that smell
Of him.

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poetvg's picture

lovely work
on here

vjochum's picture

Yes, "The feeling of rightness and calm"....
Whether with oneself, or with another.
I am glad you found me Deborah, now I can have the pleasure of reading your work too.