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Dance On
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Just a Poem Make your mind dance on
Dance on strings of sounds
Make it lift out and beyond
All you imagined
On strings of sounds
Resounding inside the temple
The temple of your brain
Flowing between ideas and joys
All you imagined
On strings of sounds
Play, finger across a board
Across a tremor of sound
Play across a soul
My heart sings
On strings of sounds
Make the world dance on
Dance on strings of sounds.
i just joined this sight, and this is the first poem i have critiqued. i just wanted to tell you that i love this poem. it is written very elegantly and softly. just wanted to give you credit where credit is due. written beautifully.
kim
This is beautiful making me dance right now.