Continued from part 1
Please read chapter 1 first
Rough Draft really rough draft
She bolted like the thunder
Captured in the hollows
mountains and valleys
Echoing portent of rain
She ran fast down the street
Clutching her coat
In a mad dash of the sane
What was that premonition
That kismet of excitement
What was that
That echoed in
Her?
The thread was weaving
Its charms like a tangle
She fought it with her
Arms
As she ran down the street.
She had to get home
Get away from the ions
The atoms of his form
That she saw so clearly
So clinging to her heart
It ached from it absence
No longer there
Her heart beat grew louder
As she approached her
Safe haven
Entering quickly
She slams the door.
She leans breathing
The breath of the
Cursed
Holding the door
Against all she’d been
Fearing
He had her this stranger
He knew her
This stranger
How had she escaped
How will she
Circumvent the Cognoscenti
This specialist of her soul
She hears that it is quiet now
No call from the street
He did not follow
Her
as she ran from his
Latency
What did he want from her
What did he need
What did he see
In her little girl
Heart.
Panic and pathos
For her missing heart
She dressed slowly
In flannel and lace
Lace on her skin
Flannel covers her arms
As she crawls to
The sheltered being
Of her bed
The chimera of the evening
Fades from her
Brain
She clutches
at the hollow of her
Chest, crying for something
She didn’t know that was missing
Where is he
She wonders
Why isnt he here
Why wouldn’t she allow
His tender touches
That seared
Her skin to his fingertips
Traced on her neck
As he brought her lips close
And he whispered her name
Why wouldn’t she allow
After he pulled her from her hollow
And lead her to the corridor
Down pass brightly lit
Kitchen
To the dark lighted hall
Rooms full of beds
Shadowed deep and forbidding
As he choose one and entered
Her hands trailing in his
She stumbled at first
What was his intentions
Little girl she hears her mind say
Little girl don’t be afraid
But it was him that she heard
As he caused her to sway.
Their bodies ignited
Through shirts and a blouse
And his lips charred
Her mouth as she finally gave in
Like finding home
The embrace in the form
Of forever
Encompassing her
So making her whole
The kiss soft and not urgent
Taking its time
Finding her rhythm
Answering her back
His kissed with his thoughts
She could see where they lead
And she went there unheeded
She would never have guessed
That this was her body
All calming and quiet.
And the kiss,
To hear the kiss, as a,
In this dinlessness,
As an
Exchange
of words
I want what you are,
ahh
I need what you are
ooo
Please take what I am
All
She fell into the blackness
That carried her soul
Over the want
Into the need
He was backing her up slowly
Taking small steps
with each kiss
Edging undulating their movements
Towards the an insiduous landing.
On comforter and pillows
As she lands she is startled
Suddenly
Aware of her surroundings
But he presses her lips
And she surrenders again.
"I want to make love to you."
The kisses are speaking
"I want to make love slow
Slow slow love
To you and hold you naked
Cradle you gently
Kiss you and maybe even spank you
If you dare to say no.
But not here my dear
No not here."
She could feel the thread
Tighten and she let out a gasp
And she looked at the man
A stranger she did not know.
That’s all she remembers
Until she’s flannelled and laced
Her dreams fill with
Filament turning silver
To gold.
A lion heated goat
With a serpentine tail
Whispers
I want what you are,
ahh
I need what you are
ooo
Please take what I am
Now
Interesting
Well written, longer than usual.
You are ions away from finished poem
ALOHA
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Longer than Usual
I've been challenged by the Director, my mentor and former muse, to write a long form narrative poem, novel length. This is the rough rough draft of the 2nd chapter. I invite you to read the first chapter as well unless you have already. And I am eons of ions away, I like that from finished.
Thanks
"Get away from the ions The
"Get away from the ions
The atoms of his form"
Nice!
"charred" "seared" evocative images.
"I have become a second generation cosmic being, I am conceived in the womb of nature, in my own mind... In the womb of the universe."
Thanks
Rough outline, just cant keep this stuff to myself. Publish it like a Dickens story one chapter at a time. Atoms and ions seem super natural yet based in science with energy and changability. Glad you liked it
a Poetic Novel.
I will check out chapter I. ~A~
Thanks
All very rough drafts Just need a place to keep them as i work. Thoughts Ideas welcomed.
My comments in Chapter one should shine some light on the process.