The beast of the moment,
Is to see this through.
To understand the format,
But be compelled, to
Mark sudden indifferences
To what I am feeling.
Slowly showing faces
Which I'm not forgiving.
Time Time Time
Passes abhorrent.
Weakening the water
That once held us buoyant
Finalize and futurized
Look outward for the omen
Metaphorically rhyming
The beast to the moment.
Author's Notes/Comments:
Changed a few words Abhorrently passes to passes abhorrid and I look outward seeking to omen.
Forgiving could be changed to revealing. but would change the meanig too much. For the sake of Rhyme or content? Thats is the...decision.
Basically theres an elephant in the room but I had agreed to the rules of engagement. Then I start to notice changes and sides not seen but warned of. Time marches on and makes the heart less firm in its commitment. Things change and I look for the sign that changes the elephant to reality. It is what it is and nothing more...
Adhorrid
what?
isnt a word.Otherwise a nice write.
id re work that line if it were me.But I shouldn't even be critiquing.
you are emoting those feelings HW
thats what I truly do care about
hugs, Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Shakespeare
Shakespeare made up words and they call him a genius,why can't I? Lol. Thanks for pointing it out. When i was learning to write I would get my d's and b's reversed. I was Deddie and my father was Dabby. It was our running joke throughout his life. Maybe in honor of Fathers Day he made his presence known.
hugs