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Competitive Love
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2016
Competition for a heart, she made
her way down the hall. Checking
doors and windows to be sure no one
gets inside. Stuffing her hands deep
in her pockets, avoiding touch and
caresses. Marking heel scuffs on the
floors. Picking lint from her fingers
she lifts her hands to pray.
Competition for love keeps
the sunlight out. Drapes of heavy damask
mask the need inside. Drawn and
pulled with her praying hands, she
cries into the fabric.
Competition for her heart has long
passed. She breaks the brocade and
peeks outside. Happy couples
coupled by their limbs. Intertwined in
soft possession. Gone for her now.
Gone.
I want her
To want me.
Just Because.
KS
Yes
That's so true
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Because...
Becausee you like the challenge of surmounting her walls. Would you then abandon her?
~D
Yes poignant
Tangible words
i could feel these
well composed words.
Koko~
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
tangible sadness
tangible sadness in this poem
May the desires God has planted in her heart be filled quickly
Yes
I so agree.
its a hard thing to endure or watch. I've a person of some interest who hasn't a clue ...what to do,but start moving,
and a friend in same situation, different gender....
rejection sucks!
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words