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A Bag of Wet Sugar
I'm as graceful as a bag of wet sugar
And just as sweet
Were you holding my hand because you wanted to?
Or just to keep me upright?
And I can't remember if I kissed you
Or if we kissed each other.
Made a fool of myself earlier that night
It was gangnam, but not stylish
I've fallen and look like I lost a fight
Maybe I have and maybe it is
All I can do to keep my mind
From wandering back to you
I'm as graceful as a bag of wet sugar
And just as sweet
I came running when I was convinced by my friends
That it's the right thing to do
He was there but then again so was I
But you were too
If I was on my own would I have been Jens
Or would I have been myself?
Should I get up and get back on the horse
Or get back on the shelf
All I can do to keep my mind
Is to not try to think of you
I'm as graceful as a bag of wet sugar
And just as sweet
Awesome poem!! I loved it.
Awesome poem!! I loved it. Please check out one of my poems!!
A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)
I think the word way is
I think the word way is missing here
"And I can't remember if I kissed you
Or if we kissed each other.
Made a fool of myself earlier WAY that night"
love those lines by the way
and these
"Should I get up and get back on the horse
Or get back on the shelf"
:) still love your writing my dear
Much Love
Ashley
Shelved
Been on the shelf so long, forgot how to dance. That was my favorite line too. Drunk or sober, it was incredibly written ~~~ Lady A