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Young Forever
When I'm on my own, I still act to impress you
Because I like to beleive you can see everything I do.
I hate how everything has changed,
I just wish it was last summer again.
But it was great to see you once again.
She says she wants to grow old with me,
But i'm going to be
Young forever.
You were the one who never listened,
I was the one who never learned,
I'll never care or understand,
All of the things I've heard.
But it was great to see you once again.
She says she wants to grow old with me,
But i'm going to be
Young forever.
i like the poem and the emotion being put into it. you remember commenting on a poem of mine. the poems was dying sounds good. you wrote that there's more to life then love. well i now agree with you. i'm not in love w/nobody anymore. my heart is no longer broken. might be scarred but not broken. and though i don't have a lover. i am happy and feel free. for once in my life i'm completely healed of my pain and sorrow. my heart is finally pieced back together. and it's actually cuz of me not cuz of a guy. for once i did it by myself w/the help of God.
anyways back to your poem...didn't mean to babble....the poem was very good. i could feel the emotion from it. but i will say this nobody's going to be young forever. we always grow older every second of the day. our minds can still be like a young person but we all age w/in time. but great and heartfelt poem.
good job. keep up the writing.