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Edls
There’s nothing more that I can say
Without breaking down and pointing fingers.
Such a thing can't be so sweet
Can't take my breath make soul mates sleep.
Who am I
That you can find
A reason to step out of line?
The foreign game preludes a kiss
The ground erupts and in the mist
The skies are cloudy, this half wont end
I'll be safe in your head.
Who am I
That you can find
A reason to step out of line?
yeah not fond of this one, it might be better with music behind it
much love
ash
Much Love
Ashley
It sounds like dreams of editing a poetic verse, after a bad review, to me anyway. I have people tell me to use this word or change that line, and it makes me feel like they are destroying my "me" that is in the verse. Picking "me" apart and changing 'me' to conform to how they think I should be seen. I probably interpret it this way because I get about 1,000 reviews each month, so I feel like I am constantly being criticized and revised..hehe...'tis my choice though 'eh? But some people are just too rude and show me scorn in everyway, but offer no suggestions or constructive criticism.
Well that was my rant for the day...pretty mild..thanks fer listening.
Anyway, let me know how far off base I am, you can review my review..hehe..laters..Polly
I'll tell you what i think.
I don't fecking understand! XD