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Blind
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Blind -
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Have you ever felt like you've never felt before?
You'll know from the way your heart will soar,
Call me Naive and young, but call me in love,
Whatevers the matter, whatevers enough and more.
Do you need a cane?
Do you need a sign?
Do I need to fucking
Scream to catch your eye.
Are you blind?
Am I invisible?
Have I lost my mind,
Or have you stolen it.
I feel like if i never let you go,
Then my life will be complete.
I don't need to breath the air,
I don't need to love and care,
For anyone but you.
Do you need a cane?
Do you need a sign?
Do I need to fucking
Scream to catch your eye.
Are you blind?
Am I invisible?
Have I lost my mind,
Or have you stolen it.
Wrapped up in the minute
In memories that aren't real,
In dreams of love
The irrational.
Whats wrong with that?
Do you need a cane?
Do you need a sign?
Do I need to fucking
Scream to catch your eye.
Are you blind?
Am I invisible?
Have I lost my mind,
Or have you stolen it.
"I'd give you my heart
If i only had two,
I'd give you my heart,
Only if i had to."
k I really like how you worded
"Have I lost my mind,
Or have you stolen it."
god if I had a penny for eveyrtime I've felt that way, well I'd probley just get a chocolate bar but still lol
"Wrapped up in the minute
In memories that aren't real,"
seriously I am starting to love your work, are you sure we don't share a mind?
I'd give you my heart
If i only had two,
I'd give you my heart,
Only if i had to."
that is possibly the best thign I have read in ages!
this also seems like a song I'd love to hear it with music
Much Love
Ashley
like this...you may be young but very talented...keep em coming
I like the under-tone I got from this poem...you're saying are you blind, but the way I read it its as if you're saying.."What are you deaf too?"..did I just make sense? anyway I don't know if that was intentional...but a very enjoyable poem none the less...thank you for that lovely quote you left in my guestbook...my..my..isn't my guestbook all fancy scmancy now??...hehe..take care..Polly
I remember visiting your site a while ago, but today i read a reccomendation to your stuff and I came back, not realising you were the same guy. I really liked this poem first time around, but never got a chance to comment. I remembered it as soon as i read it again, it's got a very distinctive beat to it, and i love the message and double meanings at the end. Oh, and you posted it on my birthday, hehe.
Great job on this
Lauren x