If real people don't feel like this,
What does that make me??
Am I still the kinda guy you'd love to meet.
It could always be worse
And it will be one day soon,
If nothing else that’s all I can promise you.
Tell me it can't be love, if it’s rational,
I've lost my faith in happy endings.
Don't look so alive,
You're much too young to smile.
So romance is dead.
That’s the way we love today,
Will you kill me now?
So I can join it in the grave.
Stanza one and four were my favourites here. It's funny how it all came together...and it made sense to me...i might have to try it one day.
=D
Lauren x x
Hi there..do you remember me? Polly? I think Oscar Wilde is the coolest man ever. Well me hopes you do, I posted a poem earlier and in it I talked about how I hate my bellybutton touched, and it triggered a memory of reading in your profile what you had said about your bellybutton and how I thought it was a poem all in itself(I know I remember everything)..anyway, I just wanted to see how you were --your poetry as I remember touched my heart in a very profound way. You are quite the unique young man. I was remembering you told me last time we spoke that you were starting to play the keyboard, and I was wondering how that was going and if your music was taking the direction you had hoped. Well if you ever post any of it I would love to hear it...I also have been posting at
http://www.purelydreaming.com/Pollyanna--here I can incorporate art
and
www.ghoststorysite.com/purledreams --this is my ghost site
I am trying to write a novel through my journal there..I would love to see you stop in...take care..
oh yeah..hehe..my bad..your poem..lol
sorry...I think everybody feels this way indeed and they are either inarticulate, or too chicken to convey their feelings..I really hope all is well with you..Polly