I tried to cling to something of my past,
But i should have let go fast,
Now i don't know if my heart will last.
I sought the one thing I had before,
For I still wanted it more,
Now my heart has become sore.
Into darkness my heart has gone,
No longer can I continue on,
For I lost instead of won.
So now I wait at the bottom of the sea,
For a rescuer to come to me,
And bless me for eternity.
very good
I really like this poem , read it a few times and each time it just gave me such a strong feeling, maybe its because i can relate to it in a way. Good write man