Lover's Night

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That Girl...

On a cloudless summer night
She had me in pure delight
With her sweetest kiss
Taking me past bliss
In the hottest weather
We made love together

Author's Notes/Comments: 

One of the first poems I ever wrote and in a lot of ways still one of my best works. It's short and sweet.

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S74rw4rd's picture

Yes it is short and sweet,

Yes it is short and sweet, and sweet is a modest understatement.  It suggests a delightfully erotic backstory.  The description of the weather reminds me of the summer, 1976, when I experienced the first great love of my entire existence, which still resonates with me today.  Thank you for this beautiful poem, which is very classic in its brevity, and very stellar in the cerulean glow of the emotion it presents.


Starward

nightlight1220's picture

Great rhyming. Love it. Short

Great rhyming. Love it. Short and sweet like a sassy stolen kiss on the cheek.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

I wrote this for the only

I wrote this for the only girl I loved I have not felt like this for too long.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

soulstonic's picture

It is short and sweet and

It is short and sweet and delectable!<3

~Soul