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helpless victim of mine and yours
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Randomnessoscity! you are the helpless victim
of the tangled enmeshment of
our problems.
i succumb to the
entranced intoxification of your
lips on mine and our legs
i n t e r t w i n e d
Wow,In a few words,How strong u made ur point.Really talented writer u r.Must learn st from u.If u dont mind give me some tips too.
I loved ur way with words here "enmeshment" "entranced" "intoxification " "i n t e r t w i n e d"
Satrnge words,Starnge meanings.Smartly used.Loved the way u had ended this poem.So seducing...i felt going thro'...if i may say so:-)