As he picked the wild daisy
he knew he was crazy
for she loves me, she loves me not
was something he hadn’t ever done
As he walked slowly and petals fell
tears began in his eyes to swell
for he was uncertain if he wanted
an answer to a question
on such a sunny day
he was slow to count
and careful to pull the petal off
in such a way
that the answer
he mustn’t allow
his heart to sway
He thought of her
and of their fate
as a petal fell
he’d hesitate
making sure that
each one fell to
proper time
and in his mind
he thought of her
and how like the petal
how he himself had fell
in love...with her in time
Surmised to himself
that if nothing else
his remembrance of her
sometimes lost in blur
would now be in focus
and the answer he’d await
like the dance to the dancer
another petal would fall
as she danced vividly
across his mind
he'd recall
her smell
while another petal
softly fell
No longer would he guess
as this flower would attest
an answer to a question
he had pondered
and wondered
over and over in his mind
and as the last petal got closer
he knew he would somehow find
closure, with the answer
a simple way, today,
he would know in a few moments in time
And as the last petal softly fell
the eyes began to quickly swell
tears made him so blind
he'd find the past like the present
he could not begin to see
for the flower had spoken
and although it was only a token
he cried…as he whispered…"she loves me"
Copyright ©-2001 Dennis Hicks
How can one's fate rest on a daisy? I guess the answer always makes one cry. The lucky gets 'she loves me'...the unlucky, '...he loves me not' Both are worth the tears.
Good write, Dennis. I enjoyed it, as usual.
Kim