No one understands the way i feel,
I cry in the dark , when i think of you,
So everytime you cross my mind,
I take the blade and cut my side,
To relieve all the pain inside,
So next time you see me,
Do'nt be surprised ,
If i'm in my room,
ALready in my Doom!
I feel 4 u, but cutting is so
I feel 4 u, but cutting is so stupid. Y? There must be another way...
My Secret River
I can certainly relate to
I can certainly relate to this; that's already the mark of a good poem. Let it flow... don't be constricted by rhyme and meter if you don't want to be. It's awesome that you could write this for your friend. Enchanting.....
Your Friend,
Seraphim
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
HEY TO THE PEOPLE WHO READ
HEY TO THE PEOPLE WHO READ THIS POEM THIS POEM WAS BASED ON ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS. AND I WROTE ABOUT HOW SHE FELT IN HER HARD STRUGGLES.!
good write :)
good write :)
Amazing!
This is really haunting, yet amazing at the same time! I can relate to this...