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When You Look at Me'
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Just a thought! Standing there, in silent pause, you weep behind the pane,
You look at me and see yourself, with nothing more to gain.
A forward view depresses you, all caught up in the past,
You say you know, but won't let go of shadows that you cast.
Look at me, what do you see?... Your heart has no desire,
When all you do is dwell on what was, there's no future to inspire.
Take a peek, deep down inside, and you'll see those painful ties...
You need a new start, so release your heart'...The mirror never lies'
It paints
A picture
That they see.
But
When you look
Deeper
You try to see.
What has
Been revealed
To you
If you would
Change your mind
Is Everything
That they don't see
Unless
You write
Another line .
I agree it has a beautiful
I agree it has a beautiful flow, indeed. Both enchanting and haunting. Love it :)
Let your teeth show
Love the rhyme and flow,
Love the rhyme and flow, great poem :-)